I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, June 12, 2020
Pick a path
Today in writing I finished adding some finishing touches to my pick a path story called Dimension 3589 and it includes a lot of linking and pictures.And before you start I'll tell you this much... there's 2 good endings one for a troll and one for the wood elf.Have you done a Pick a path story before?
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hi Cole l really like how you where creative it reminds me of your game
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Hi Cole,
ReplyDeleteI like your story, I got the good ending and the abducted ending was a bit evil... your story was really creative, I think maybe if you made it so your story was bigger, have you made any previous pick a paths?
Hi Cole it is Connor i really like your pick a path and i tried over and over but i kept dying :)
ReplyDeleteHi cole its me Bry and Josh i like how you put video games into slides and
ReplyDeletemaybe next time you could ad more games.